Question by ¢αѕѕαη∂яα ♥: Another alt version for the beginning of my novel. :p first draft. opinions? Advice? I sat high on a cushioned stool, tapping my fingers against the cold, hard granite countertop of the greeting table. My head rested on my palm as my eyes explored around the room. I checked on the [...]
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Another alt version for the beginning of my novel. :p first draft. opinions? Advice?
November 15th, 2010 
Admin Beginning of my novel. VERY first draft. (read it over once, I’m editing now) Opinions? Criticism?
November 15th, 2010 Admin Question by ¢αѕѕαη∂яα ♥: Beginning of my novel. VERY first draft. (read it over once, I’m editing now) Opinions? Criticism? I sat high on a cushioned stool, tapping my fingers against the cold, hard granite countertop of the greeting table. My head rested on my palm as my eyes explored around the room. I checked [...]
Beginning of first chapter for my novel. Criticism? Opinions?
November 15th, 2010 Admin Question by ¢αѕѕαη∂яα ♥: Beginning of first chapter for my novel. Criticism? Opinions? I sat high on a cushioned stool, tapping my fingers against the cold, hard granite countertop of the greeting table. My head rested upon my palm as my eyes explored around the room. I checked on the clock every now and again. [...]
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5 Comments »is $15,000 to much for a wedding and reception hall??? heres some info?
November 15th, 2010 Admin Question by : is ,000 to much for a wedding and reception hall??? heres some info? ALL OF THIS IS INLCUDED ( BUT IT DOES NOT INCLUDE THE FOOD/FLOWERS) Five Hour Rental 3 Hour Pre-Event for Ladies of the Bridal Party/Family In The Bridal Suite Including Champagne and Cheese platter for Bridal Party [...]
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November 15th, 2010 Admin Question by Reenie: Mom of Marine: Your opinions on a descriptive essay please? This was an exercise in a class writing books for children. Tuttle Lake All the familiar sensations came rushing back as I rounded the cottage and headed for the path that led to the lake. “Yes!” I thought as I squinted through [...]
Comments on this descriptive essay?
Question by Reenie: Mom of Marine: Comments on this descriptive essay? Tuttle Lake All the familiar sensations came rushing back as I rounded the cottage and headed for the path that led to the lake. “Yes!” I thought as I squinted through the thick pine branches at the cloudless blue sky. “This is a perfect [...]