Question by ¢αѕѕαη∂яα ♥: Another alt version for the beginning of my novel. :p first draft. opinions? Advice? I sat high on a cushioned stool, tapping my fingers against the cold, hard granite countertop of the greeting table. My head rested on my palm as my eyes explored around the room. I checked on the [...]
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Another alt version for the beginning of my novel. :p first draft. opinions? Advice?
November 15th, 2010 
Admin Beginning of my novel. VERY first draft. (read it over once, I’m editing now) Opinions? Criticism?
November 15th, 2010 Admin Question by ¢αѕѕαη∂яα ♥: Beginning of my novel. VERY first draft. (read it over once, I’m editing now) Opinions? Criticism? I sat high on a cushioned stool, tapping my fingers against the cold, hard granite countertop of the greeting table. My head rested on my palm as my eyes explored around the room. I checked [...]
Beginning of first chapter for my novel. Criticism? Opinions?
November 15th, 2010 Admin Question by ¢αѕѕαη∂яα ♥: Beginning of first chapter for my novel. Criticism? Opinions? I sat high on a cushioned stool, tapping my fingers against the cold, hard granite countertop of the greeting table. My head rested upon my palm as my eyes explored around the room. I checked on the clock every now and again. [...]
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